Refining Your Voice

Writing is personal. It’s layered with voice, intent, and meaning. My role as a line editor is to refine that voice, not replace it. I help your work communicate with clarity, precision, and impact while staying unmistakably yours!

If you’ve completed a draft and know it’s almost there but not quite landing the way you want, line editing is the step that bridges that gap.

Line Edit Portfolio Available Upon Request


What Is Line Editing?

Line editing focuses on the craft of your sentences. It looks closely at how your ideas are expressed line by line to strengthen clarity, tone, rhythm, and flow. I approach editing as a collaborative process. You won’t just receive a marked-up document, but also insight into why changes are suggested so you can continue strengthening your writing long after this project. You remain the author. My role is to help your work say exactly what you mean more effectively.

In a line edit, I work directly within your manuscript to:

  • Refine sentence structure and readability
  • Strengthen word choice and eliminate redundancy
  • Improve pacing and narrative flow
  • Clarify meaning without flattening your voice
  • Ensure consistency in tone and style

I’m not rewriting your work. This is about elevating the work to allow your voice to come through more powerfully and intentionally.

Line editing differs from other types of editing in the following ways:

  • Developmental – Finding the “big picture” narrative arc
  • Copy – More technical in nature, correcting grammar, punctation and syntax and creating consistency with formatting guidelines
  • Proofreading – This is the final polish before publication, happening after all substantive editing is complete

Areas of Focus

Memoir

Memoir requires a careful balance between emotional truth and narrative clarity. I specialize in helping writers:

  • Maintain authenticity while strengthening readability
  • Shape reflection into compelling narrative
  • Ensure tone remains consistent and grounded
  • Clarify timelines and transitions without losing intimacy

Your story matters. My goal is to help readers feel it the way you intend.


Fiction

In fiction, every sentence contributes to immersion. My line editing focuses on:

  • Strengthening narrative voice and stylistic consistency
  • Enhancing dialogue for realism and impact
  • Improving pacing at the sentence and paragraph level
  • Eliminating distractions that pull readers out of the story

Whether your style is literary, commercial, or somewhere in between, I help refine the language so the story moves seamlessly.


Rates

You can expect:

  • A fully edited manuscript with tracked changes
  • Margin comments explaining key suggestions
  • Optional summary notes highlighting patterns and opportunities for growth

For:

  • $0.02/word Line edit only
  • $0.03/word Developmental and Line edit package

If you’re unsure what level of editing you need, I’m happy to help you determine the best next step.


Let’s Work Together

If you’re ready to refine your manuscript and bring your writing to its fullest potential, I’d love to collaborate with you! Manuscripts do not have to be complete, and it’s often more cost effective for clients to work in smaller chunks. Reach out to discuss your project, timeline, and next steps with a free consultation!

Louisville, KY based Consultant serving clients nationwide